Our feelings today!

Regardless of the dull weather and overcast sky, we did give proof of sharing deep feelings today, didn’t we?

So post your great "feelings", share them.  Your poems were music to my ears today, so why not sharing them with whoevever may wish to read them?

MELANCHOLY

MELANCHOLY is the colour of cloudy skies and rainy days; it’s the colour of pulluted Beijing and swarming New York. 
I feel it when I feel lonely and isolated, I feel it when I’m caged, I feel it when I’m not understdoo, I feel it when there’s indifference and lack of sympathy around me.
It sounds like heavy stamping soldiers, a maddening stamped of angry buffalos, the deafening sound of hoofs on a cobbled street, the flat voice of a person you care for who utters the slashing words "I don’t care".
When we live with melancholy
We lose the beauty in us
we let our ‘inner chords’ rust away
we step towards the realm of Life in Death
It tastes of metal and when it is in your mouth you can’t spit it, it gets attached to your teeth and your palate
AND
I see it in my ‘species’

I dream of MELANCHOLY when I read appalling news in the paper or watch stupid TV programmes

And I hope that one day MELANCHOLY will disappear from the dictionary of mankind, never to make its return.

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9 risposte a Our feelings today!

  1. SweetGlo scrive:

    MELANCHOLY

    Melancholy is the colour of the clouds in the sky.

    I feel it when I have not even will to try.

    It sounds like the pouring rain on my roof

    and many people think it is the human’s loneliness’ proof.

    When we live with melancholy

    We see ourselves from outside and we can’t feel the joy of life.

    It tastes of Autumn’s chestnuts and hot chocolate in cups

    and I see it in my Winter’s dinner’s soups.

    I dream of melancholy

    when I feel like thinking of myself,

    some

    Winter’s days, under my blanket, when the night comes.

    And I hope that one day melancholy will turn into a big smile,

    when I’ll see out my window the sunshine in the sky.

  2. anonimo scrive:

    SADNESS

    Sadness is the colour of the worst days in our life.

    I feel it when I have a bad day.

    It sounds like when the things are wrong and we are going to get angry with ourselves and many people think it is a negative feeling.

    When we live with sadness we can’t do something in the same way as when we are happy.

    It tastes of the rain when falls down from the sky and I see it in many days of my life.

    I dream of sadness when I get bad marks at school,when something bad happens to someone of my dear friends.

    I hope that one day sadness will disappear,because i think that living without it is better,i belive happiness is the only thing we need,our hearts must be free by this spirit.

    ELENA

  3. 11charlie11 scrive:

    BALANCE

    Balance is the colour of normal days

    when nothing make us feel different

    I feel it when I do what I have to do

    It sounds like a plain thing

    and many people think it is boring

    When we live with balance

    we don’t have problems with our selves

    but we still miss something

    It tastes of Tasteless

    and sounds of Emptiness

    and I see it in my classes that are endless

    I dream of balance when I

    am anxious or sad or worried

    And I hope that one day balance

    will cover pain, anxiety and sadness,

    so that later we can turn it in glee and happiness.

  4. anonimo scrive:

    HAPPYNESS

    HAPPINESS is the colour of a lost soul’s dream.

    I feel it when I put life in every single moment I live.

    It sounds like something impossible to have and many people think it’s like a comandement.

    When we live with HAPPINESS we are supposed to be pleased with ourselves.

    It tastes of mint, loud music and summertime’s sunrise and I see it in my heart.

    I dream of HAPPINESS when I think about the future and I dream about what I want to do in my life.

    And I hope that one day HAPPINESS will find place in everybody’s heart.

  5. becreative scrive:

    INDIFFERENCE

    Indifference is the colour of people who don’t care about anything, empty inside…

    I feel it when I see everything’s gonna go wrong, I feel blue and finally indifference comes…

    It sounds like you don’t give life the importance she has…

    and many people think it’s negative…

    When we live with indifference we don’t care about anything and we seem to be computers, without any feelings…

    It tastes of something that hasn’t any taste and I see it in some persons I know…

    I dream of indifference when I cared too much about something that hurts me…

    And I hope one day indifference will leave everyone…

  6. anonimo scrive:

    INDIFFERENCE

    Indifference is the colour of a smart behaviour

    I feel it when I think just with my mind

    it sounds like freedom and many people think it is an indipendant behaviour

    When we live with indiffernce we don’t care too much about what others think or do

    It tastes of pizza and nutella and I see it in my everyday’s choices

    I dream of indifference when i take the right desicion and I want to be indipendant

    And i hope that one day indifference will be more important for people and they’ll do something not only because all the others do it, but easily as they want to.

  7. anonimo scrive:

    ANXIETY

    anxiety is the colour of the dark sky when it’s going to rain.

    I feel it when I’m look for something to happen or somebody to see.

    Its sounds like the belts when someone dies and many people think it is a paranoic feeling, an illness.

    When we live with anxiety

    We don’t know what to do in the right way, we aren’t able to think clearly.

    It tastes of tobacco and a chewing gum that has lost its taste

    and I see it in my stomach when it hurts me.

    I dream of anxiety when I don’t see a person important to me

    And I hope that ne day anxiety will let mje alone and live in relax.

    gloria

  8. anonimo scrive:

    SADNESS

    sadness is the colour of dark days when things go wrong.

    I feel it when I can’t meet my friends.

    It sounds like the rain that falls down on the windous and many people think it is nagging and useless.

    when we live with SADNESS we can’t appreciate all the beautiful things that happen to us.

    it tastes of sour and cream and I see it in the cloudy sky.

    I draem of SADNESS when I think of my dog’s death…and I hope that one day SADNESS disappeares and doesn’t ruled on our hearts, making all days special!

    fabiola

  9. anonimo scrive:

    GLEE

    Glee is the colour of eyes of who stand araund us

    Ifeel it when I dance wit my favourite music

    It sounds like a sound or a noise

    and many people think it is an utopia

    When we live with GLEE,

    we could feel proud or afraid

    It tastes of sweet or saulthy

    and I see it in my hopes

    I dream of GLEE when I think about my friends and what surronds me

    And I hope that one day GLEE could be in every body’s heart!